Thursday 30 May 2013

Economy of style.

Richness of story. Economy of style. Part 2 of 2.
(For Part 1 see previous post.)

This is what I'm aiming at: I want to develop a rich story but I want to achieve economy of style. Richness and economy. It's the Holy Grail for writers. Richness in content but economy of means. What do other people think? Here is a quick bit of research (Part Two).

Economy of style

Item 1. Rutgers University is brief and to the point. (Jack Lynch)
  • Using no more words than necessary
Item 2. Brigham Young University goes into more detail (BYU Writing Center)
  • Eliminate wordiness
  • Dump introductory words 
  • Avoid prepositional phrases
  • Cut vague nouns
  • Do not repeat yourself (This is my besetting sin! Arrgh!)
  • Don't keep saying the same thing in different ways (See what I mean.)
  • Use one word where three will do
  • Write in active voice
Item 3. Hemmingway's iceberg principle (Sparknotes)
  • Only let the tip of the story show. Keep the rest below the waterline. 
Item 4. Stephen Wilbers in Writing for Business and Pleasure
  • Avoid wordy phrases
  • Omit modifiers
  • Use action verbs
There you have it. Go and do likewise.
Ends

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